What the recruiter is looking for
Figures
An average basket, a number of calls a day, a target hit. Even in a student job, a figure makes the experience credible.
Customer contact
Retail, reception, hospitality, events: anything that put you in front of customers counts.
A taste for prospecting
Field visits, the phone, follow-ups. Say they don't scare you, and prove it with an example.
Product knowledge
What the company sells and to whom. A salesperson who doesn't know the catalogue doesn't sell.
Example letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
Starting a [BTS NDRC] at [school] in [September 2026], I am looking for a [two-year] sales apprenticeship, with [two days at college and three days at work]. Your offer caught my attention because [you sell solutions to local businesses, a market I know well].
Over [two summers] at [store], I advised a wide range of customers and beat the [add-on sales] target by [15%] over the season. I learnt to listen before suggesting anything, and to close without pushing.
I am not afraid of the phone. For [the association / the student project], I approached [40 shops] to find partners and won over [8] of them. I tracked every contact in a spreadsheet and followed up with those who hesitated.
[Company name] appeals to me because of [specific reason: the quality of your products, which I saw at a client's, and the field role you give apprentices]. I want to learn B2B sales with a team that has clear targets.
I would be happy to discuss this with you at an interview.
Yours faithfully,
[First name Surname]
Replace everything in square brackets. Keep the structure, change the examples: a recruiter spots a copied letter within one line.
Keywords found in these ads
- Prospecting
- Customer relations
- Negotiation
- Customer retention
- CRM
- Sales targets
- Business development
- B2B
- B2C
- Appointment setting
- Account management
- Cold calling
Reuse the exact terms from the ad, but only the ones you can back up with experience, a project or a course. A keyword you can't explain at interview costs you more than it earns you.
The same rules apply to your CV.Read the ATS CV guideThe mistakes that lose the reader
- "I have good people skills" without a single example.
- Not one figure in the whole letter.
- A letter that is too long: a salesperson has to know how to be brief.
- Saying nothing about what the company sells.
Frequently asked
questions
I have no sales experience, what should I highlight?
Anything that put you in contact with the public: a summer job, reception work, a club or association, team sport. And a figure, even a modest one, to show you measure what you do.
Should I mention commission?
No, not in the letter. It is a topic for the interview, and often set by the apprenticeship contract.
See also
Letter templates
Apprenticeship cover letter examples by job: web developer, UX/UI designer, sales, HR, marketing, accounting. With practical tips.
Digital marketing
Example cover letter for an apprenticeship in digital marketing, community management or SEO: what recruiters expect, a full letter, keywords.
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